I completely missed this little “Golden Shovel” challenge, hosted by Monty Vern. But, better late than never. Here is my very impulsive try at last week’s prompt.
“Time says hush. By the gong of time you live.”
The Gong of Time by Carl Sandburg (Honey and Salt)
We cannot miss it this time;
The voice that says
In soft tones: hush, hush, hush!
And as the days goes by
And at the begining of the
night. We hear the gong
A sign; a reminder of
the new time.
A time to breathe; to be – You.
You are. You exist. You’ll live.
💛🖤🤎🧡💙💚🤍❤️💜
Thank you, Monty.

Holy smokes!!! We got a hot one. If this is you writing impulsively then I can’t imagine… Seriously beautiful poem. Well done!
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Thank you very much. I never give poetry much thought or time to develop, that’s why everything I write is impulsive and not premeditated.
Thanks again. xx
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This is amazing!!!
Can’t believe it was impulsive. Beautiful!!!
I combined another prompt for this challenge and my poem went an unexpected way!
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Completely unpremeditated. It’s easiest to write that way. (For me)
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That’s just brilliant!
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Thank you very much. xx
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Wow lovely!!
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Thank you. 🙂
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