Don’t go away (old poem)

Don’t go away ’21

i like this one, how it was written and what it said. It is unmistakably my voice, but I am more restraint now. The musicality is strong in this piece too.

if you don’t like clicking linke to read, here is the complete old poem:

I am between flying and sinking
Between dreaming and thinking
There are a million reasons to be
Endless new days to see.
And all I want is to be with you;
To be awake in your thoughts too.
If you could hold my hand
You would feel and understand.
There are too many words to say,
Plead with you and beg: don’t go away.

what do you think?