Each Saturday in February, Monty shares a prompt to create a Golden Shovel Poem from. I was a bit late for the first, only wrote something late at the last minute. But this time, I am early. Feel free to join in.
“Cocoa in pods and alligator pears”
The Tropics in New York by Claude McKay
I remember her skin, it looked and tasted like cocoa
In the shadows I hide to see her chest rise as she breathes in
She knows it well; me and her, we are like peas in their pods
I cannot be without her, but I am not allowed to near her and
Every day ends with new soul-wounds; deeper than alligator
bites. I stand still. I see her, having breakfast. Eating a pear.
❤️💜🤍💚💙🧡🤎🖤💛
As always, let’s not overthink. But this reads a bit creepy. Hopefully others wrote something a less stalker-ish.
Haha. I didn’t take it as stalkerish till you pointed out. Great use of the prompt!
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Haha, that’s good.
And, thank you 🙂
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Ooo this is so well done!!!
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Didn’t take it that way, either.
Nice job!
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Thank you very much. xx
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